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alexmylo


05 Jul. 2018 47



A high school boy suffers from a hearing disorder called hyperacusis, he struggles everyday with loud noises that be painful, bringing him ear pain and annoyance. His mother is very loud person that she doesn't understand her son's condition. After a big  fight the boy run away to a mountain looking for peace.  After a night the boy found a man which was def.  They stayed together  in his cabin for a few days and they had fun.  The middle aged man was dying from cancer and he passed away a day after. The boy returned to his home and his mother was worried sick and she hug him.  He told her where he was and the man who helped him, she showed him a picture of that man, and she said that was your father. 


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stardust

I wish you good luck!


princess

Good luck!


Eva_2018

good luck


tomwill

Nice


kostas_FA

Good luck


George.br

good luck!


mikejones

Good luck


Esther

This is very short but the idea is great!


ruchi

The story is strong. The viewpoint and approach isn't something I want to win the competition.



DoulaDonousa

The hearing problem can be very very creative part. The father part, is common.


soula2

Good luck


lolita01

boring!


zoustos

Good Luck!!!


kostas21

Unique story, good luck


ema23

Very nice!


lizardspencer

Simply great! (the dramatic ending's not even necessary!) Good luck!


mariagal

Nice plot with the hearing disorder.


kemo123

The hearing disorder I can picture it nicely. I am sure the story has many parts that are very interesting and cannot be written in just one paragraph. The son and lost dad story are touching yet seen before.


Mark88

Interesting drama


Georgerose

A very good story


vasilikimalliari7

Nice plot!


Janis

Nice work


kostas20

Simple and interesting!


virus666

Interesting , Good luck


bluesky

It was really a nice story with a good ending. However, I think that you should hide the way that the story ends, because the readers don't have something more to expect to see. For example, you could edit your summary without revealing the relationship between the man and the boy. Good luck!


Killerman

Really amazing!!! An advice to you: Hide the ending!! Now that is early!! You will intrigue the Readers more!! Good luck!!


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