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sotos_104


08 Jun. 2018 29



 

 

 


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va1969

Nice. Up to the point.


evgkas

I think it can stand for children!


deadpoolb3

Not so rare and creative.


Tfa26

i have to agree with bluesky and maria here


bluesky

I think it's a little bit interesting but also not rare enaugh. Good luck!


maria_kasteloy

To tell the truth this is a kind of story that we have read and watched many times. There are nice parts but I think you can improve it. Good luck!


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Total rate

Solid 2.2/5
Creative 1.9/5
Thrilling 1.8/5
Rare 1.6/5
Average 1.9/5

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