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08 Jun. 2018 29
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Nice. Up to the point.
I think it can stand for children!
Not so rare and creative.
i have to agree with bluesky and maria here
I think it's a little bit interesting but also not rare enaugh. Good luck!
To tell the truth this is a kind of story that we have read and watched many times. There are nice parts but I think you can improve it. Good luck!